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#1 MUNIEK1

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Napisano 05 grudzień 2005 - 18:56

Oto tekst , zawiera błędy , prosze o zredagowanie i poprawienie błędów.

Two weeks ago we were on the trip in Crakow. From Legnica to Crakow is four houndred
kilometers , so we left from Legnica on 4 o'clock am. We had several stays after way
to order something to eat and drink something warm. On first day we had good weathwer,
there was sunny and warm. We talked and laughed over five hours in bus. Before we
approached to Crakow , we went to the salt mine in Wieliczka. We have stood over one hour
in the waiting line before we were go down in elevtor. In The mine everything was from salt
the walls , statues even floor. The salt was very salty , because I licked little.
When we saw the salt mine , we had gone straight to Crakow. We approached to Crakow
at 11 o'clock. Our hotel was placed on Sikorskiego street. We have unpacked our baggege
and we have gone to the city. City centre was our first purpose. Sukiennice and Mariacki
Curch is monuments of world classes , everybody must to see this beautiful buildings.
After several hours of touring , we made photo under monument of Adam Mickiewicz.
Then teacher gave us 3 hours of free time. We visited stores in the city centre to bought
few remembrance. After that we went to the restaurant and ate. We have returned to our hotel
at 9 o'clock pm. Supper was on 9:30 o'clock pm. After supper everybody take a bath. On 11
o'clock pm all of my friend were in they beds.
Next day we stand up on 9 o'clock am. The weather was also great just like on first day.
When we had ate breakfest , we keep going touring Crakow. On second day our purpose was Wawel.
We went from our hotel on 10:30 o'clock am. From our place to Castle we walked semi hour.
The Castle is beauriful buliding. When we had touring , we made photo under Wawelski dragon.
After that we have went to the city centre. We ate dinner and tour Barbakan. we have returned
to our hotel on 9 o'clock pm. After this heavy day everybody slept like children.
Third , last day wake up was on 8 o'clock am. Weather was not so good , it was rained.
When we packed our bags , and ate breakfest we went on way to house.
We have arrived to Auschwitz where concentration camp is placed.
We were few hours in this place. After we was touring we go straight to Legnica.
Near Wrocław our bus had flat tire. I , driver , and my friends had changed the wheel.
We went to house after that event. we were in Legnica at 6 o'clock pm.
That was my best trip ever.

Z góry dziękuje.

SOGi dla każdego kto pomoże !! ;)





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Napisano 05 grudzień 2005 - 22:52

Two weeks ago we were on a trip to Crakow. From Legnica to Crakow is four houndred kilometers , so we left from Legnica at 4 o'clock am. We had several stays during the journey in order to eat something hot. On the first day there was nice, sunny weather. We were talking and laughing over five hours in the bus. Before we approached Crakow, we had been to the salt mine in Wieliczka. We stood over one hour in the waiting line before we went down in elevtor. In the mine everything was made of salt. The walls, statues and even the floor. The salt was very salty, because I licked a little. After we had seen the salt mine, we went straight to Crakow. We approached Crakow at 11 o'clock. Our hotel was placed in Sikorskiego street. We have unpacked our baggege and we went to the city. City centre was our first purpose. Sukiennice and Mariacki Church are monuments of world classes, everybody must (to- jakie "to"?! ) see this beautiful buildings. After several hours of touring, we took photo under monument of Adam Mickiewicz. Then the teacher gave us 3 hours of free time. We visited stores in the city centre to bought some souverains. After that we went to the restaurant and ate a delicous meal. We returned to our hotel
at 9 o'clock pm. Supper was at 9:30 o'clock pm. After the supper everybody took a bath. At 11 o'clock pm all of my friend were in they beds.
Next day we woke up at 9 o'clock am. The weather was also great just like on first day. When we ate breakfest, we kept touring Crakow. On the second day our purpose was Wawel. We went from our hotel at 10:30 o'clock am. From our place to the Castle we were walking half an hour.
The Castle is a beautiful buliding. When we were touring, we took photo under the wawelski dragon. After that we went to the city centre. We ate dinner and ?tour Barbakan? . We returned to our hotel at 9 o'clock pm. After that heavy day everybody slept like a child.
On the third, last day we woke up at 8 o'clock am. Weather was very unconvinient, it was raining.
When we packed our bags, and ate breakfest we decided to come back home.
We arrived to Auschwitz where concentration camp located is.
We spent few hours in this place. After we had been touring we went back to Legnica.
Near Wrocław our bus cought a flat tire. ?I -the driver?, and my friends had changed the wheel.
We went home after that event. We were in Legnica at 6 o'clock pm.
That was the best trip I have ever had.


dużo błędów, ale wciąż tych samych więc się nie przejmuj, pamiętaj, że tylko niektóre zaznaczyłem na grubo, co nieco pozwoliłem sobie dodać/pozmieniać. Pamiętaj, ze przed godzinami jest AT A NIE ON, czesto używales niepotrzebnie prestent perfect i past perfect. Dalej są jakieś błędy, ale z grubsza poprawione. pozdraiwam.

edit: kurde pogrubienia się nie zrobiły ;-(.


Zmieniony przez - juzew w dniu 2005-12-05 22:56:04

#3 MUNIEK1

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Napisano 06 grudzień 2005 - 07:39

Dzięki za przetłumaczenie i wskazówki !! ;)

SOG dla ciebie !! ;)



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